I don't know if I'd catagorize this one as a funny poem but it was fun to read. I loved the rythmn of the thing and especially the images you gave. That was pretty awesome. The child-like wonder and imagination in your poem kept it very light and consistently amusing. Some grammer errors, but that's not important really. Good job.

I can see where a child would get caught up ,just thinking about a shop like this. could make a great childs short story.

How do we get a section this fits under better
It deserves a place