by Kayla Oct 24, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Already so many strong feelings |
by linderrrxo
I really liked this a lot love always linda 5/5 |
by XxChelseaXx
Wow, I love this poem..i can relate to the words. 5/5 |
by Jenni
I liked this poem. Your word choice was excellent. I felt as though your emotions were put right out on the line, I loved how you portrayed. it. |
Very good job. Very touching. The rhyme scheme worked really well. Nice job. |
by Jessica
Awh, this was really sweet. The flow was good most of the time and the descriptions were better than in the other poem. I think in the last stanza you should have made the last line rhyme as well. All the other lines in the poem rhyme so why should you stop at that one? Nice job though, keep it up! 5/5 |