Aww! So touching and sweet! I love this poem! The imagery and rhyme scheme are wonderful! The flow, however, could use a little work, but not much! Great job overall!!!

xxEvilAngelxx

Awh, this was really sweet. The flow was good most of the time and the descriptions were better than in the other poem. I think in the last stanza you should have made the last line rhyme as well. All the other lines in the poem rhyme so why should you stop at that one? Nice job though, keep it up! 5/5

Very good job. Very touching. The rhyme scheme worked really well. Nice job.

I liked this poem. Your word choice was excellent. I felt as though your emotions were put right out on the line, I loved how you portrayed. it.

Wow, I love this poem..i can relate to the words. 5/5

~Chelsea

I really liked this a lot love always linda 5/5