Wow... I cant really say anything to describe this but WOW... Very good I'll watch for your writing 5/5

sincerely,
Katlyn

This is such a good poem and straight from the heart. Keep it up!
Love,
Macenzie

WOW this is really good. i like the quote "Take away my control; take away my choice,
Yet the one thing you can never take is the power of my voice" good job keep it up! :)

Wow this is a very well written poem, and i thought that you were an amazing person for writing this. I loved the line 'take away my contorl; take away my choice, but the one thing you can never take is my voice' this line was so powerful and really got me thinking about how powerful a persons voice can really be. you are a truly amazing poet, and i hope to read some more of your stuff. 5/5.. keep it up..
Please could you read and comment on some of my poems, i would love to hear from you. Thanks...Kirsty

Great poem you r brave brave is doing whats right even tho u r afraid keep writing

Wow serena. i don't know what to say but this is really good and im wondering why your saying mine is good when yours is so much better. thanks for suggesting that i read it, i like it.

This is really touching your words were like a flashback if you ever need a shoulder i am here

I really do love this poem... you have awesome talent, i love it!

Thank you all for your comments, it means alot to me! :)

What a breath taking poem.. raw and creative. just brilliant x

Wow.. this is really good.. i like the repition and everything VERY GOOD!! i don't see why anybody wouldn't vot 5/5
great!

MUCH LOVE
Brittany Jean Gilbert

**checkout mine too... they aon't be as good as this one though**

O-U-T-S-T-A-N-D-I-N-G.....2 THUMBS WAAAYYY UP!!!!.