You are brilliant! This is a beautiful description of nature. You painted a picture so beautiful that it held me trapped until the end. I wish it was a little longer though. lol 5/5 Keep writing these terrific poems.

Letty

I love the descriptions used in this poem. It made it a really worthwhile read. A good flow throught it. An excellent job! Keep them up! xx

Once again a well written peice of poetry. Your words and how you use them are outstanding. I do however wish it was a little longer, seems to be kind of short.

Peace, Joe