Hate You

by just a little girl   Oct 24, 2006


I realise you hurt me so much
But I still long for you soft touch
I want to rid myself of traces
Of your soft embraces

When we were together
I saw only the good weather
Now the storms are never far away
And the sunlight is kept at bay

The darkness is too near
Life alone is what I fear
But life with you is what hurt
The way you treated me like dirt

You're not gone from me yet
Our lives together I can never forget
And on the outside I may hate you
But on the inside I still love you

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  • 17 years ago

    by young and innocent

    Love this poem
    it shows the true feeling when a relationship has ended

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I can relate to this poem 100%. I loved all of it. The imagery and emotions that you used in this was amazing. The flow and rhythm was very good and held up well. It reminds me so much of myself and I just love it. You did a wonderful job portraying your emotions in this! I hope that everything works out for the best with you :) 5/5 Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Aw. That was soo sad but some reason cute. Lol. Thanks for the comment it was greatly appreciated! 5/5

    God Bless,
    Taylor
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