Aww so cute... Love this one. The only problem with it that I found was that one line didn't flow well at all... The wording was confusing too: Forever in my heart will be you. Other than that a touching poem!

xxEvilAngelxx

I like this but the last line was a bit cliche. " You're an angel sent from above." Ive heared that phrase so many times. Butstill apart from that its a good poem. Had a nice flow and was very touching. Keep it up! xx