Excellent keep it up!

It's amazing how many people don't notice what we don't say.. Excellent job on this.. very well written and so sad but true a lot of the time 5/5 well done xx

Hey. Honestly, I think this poem is done sooo much, because it seems that so many people do the same thing and hide within fake emotion. However, with that being said, I have made a few of my own and probably will make some more (I write to rant); the only difference between yours and everyone elses- including my own- is that yours didn't drag on So much that I decided to stop reading. There wasn't any plain repitition to make it laggish and boring, you re-worded things to get your point out, and for that I say...Well Done!!!

This life it self is about pretending, we always have to pretend, pretend everything is ok smile with each other while we hide the drops of tears,
I can relate to this poem as most of the time i have to hide my tears and show a fake smile to make others happy.

great write 5/5