What i am told...

by amy   Oct 24, 2006


Disasters have occured, but this i am assured
life will get better, as i write this letter
Dreams have crashed, love ones have dashed
but i am still assured, my pain will be cured
life is going crazy, my mind is really hazy
but still i am told, the good will come and the bad will fold
this is a reinsurance, to test my endurance
but my courage will not curn, because this is suppose to turn
my life was a assured to get better
so i continued to write this letter
but if by chance it does fail
i will leave a nasty trail
a trail of doubt
a trail of hate
a trail of those who came to late
a trail of doubt
a trail of hte lost
a trail of what im told
what\'s broken and the cost...

this is what i am told...

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  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Hmmm, most excellent.

  • 18 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Its ok, but honestly it sounds kinda forced. Like youre TRYING to promote something. Poetry is about emotion so I think it kinda lacks that. But who am I to critisize?

    4/5

    [PygmyPuff]