Hey. i really love this. don't stop.
~sarah~

You are a very good poet, your work is fantastic i loved it xxx alex xxx

Aww. It's so sad. =(

[By hurting him your hurting me.]
^^I loved that line. It made me think of me and my group of friends. There's one of us who is always ditching us for a guy she just met, and he's hurting her. By hurting her, she's hurting all of us. -sigh-

Aanyways...the poem was great. =) The flow was good, the rhymes were well done, and the imagery was clear. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha