by BeautifulxMess Oct 24, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
She had a heart solid as gold. |
by UnToLd TrUtH
Wow this is so sad. And this girl does have a right to yell at the man for leaving them alone like that! 5/5 |
So sad! But sad is good lol! I really like this poem. Good job and easy too interpret. Keep on writing. By the way, try not to always force rhymes. I know i do, but speek... lol. Use spoke and rhyme it with broke. Just a hint, not a necessity. 5/5 Gret work! |
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OMG. Wow wow wow. This is sososo amazing... |