Fate

by LuvLyLynn   Oct 24, 2006


I stand in the middle of my room
With a note that I wrote in my hand
Above me is a rope and in front of me is where a chair stands...

In that note is for my family and friends with only one plea...
Only apologizing to them for what I'm about to do and in hope that they would forgive me...

As I put the note down,
controlling this heart not to cry...
All that seems to pass over my mind is the deception, pain, and lies...

I could hear the people who care about me bang forcefully on the door...
But I won't answer it because I can't take it any longer and I can't live like this no more...

Suddenly I start standing on the chair
but I could feel my legs starting to shake beneath...
As I feel myself fading away and not being able to breathe...

Then the door suddenly opens, hoping and praying that they have reached me in time, but it's too late...
For the girl that they loved and cared for, has taken her life and has ended her fate...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    I honestly didnt think shed go through with it... i was so hoping the family would get there in time. grrr!
    but overall this a really good poem.
    the flow was aight and the rhymes were perfect.
    great job!
    5/5

    ~Sandra

  • 17 years ago

    by Oscar

    Wow this poem was good, for a second ithought the parents were gonna make it on time. sad.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so sad.
    I enjoyed the flow, imagery and rhyme scheme muchly, I think you did a wonderful job.

  • 18 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    Wow this poem is amazing. You did a great job on it! Please check out my poems and let me know what you think. Thank you.
    Burning~Wings