Wow this poem is amazing. You did a great job on it! Please check out my poems and let me know what you think. Thank you.
Burning~Wings

This was so sad.
I enjoyed the flow, imagery and rhyme scheme muchly, I think you did a wonderful job.

Wow this poem was good, for a second ithought the parents were gonna make it on time. sad.

I honestly didnt think shed go through with it... i was so hoping the family would get there in time. grrr!
but overall this a really good poem.
the flow was aight and the rhymes were perfect.
great job!
5/5

~Sandra