I liked this poem, the only thing I would possibly change is the word 'to' in the fourth line.. maybe to 'don't'.. I'm not sure if it was a typo or whether it's just ignorance on my part.. but the word down spelt 'bint her' and not 'Bind Her'.. Is bint a word?

Well done though, I find it really difficult to write different styles of poetry, and You did a wonderful job on this one 5/5 xx

I love the poem but inslave (in the second line) isn't a word, to my knowledge... I think you mean: enslave... If you changed that the poem would change but it still could make sense: Bend Her... idk I feel bad now though cuz it messes the poem up... (i hope your not mad.)
It is a good poem though!

xxEvilAngelxx

Very nice. i love acrostic poems.

Ooo. Sad poems. Yay. >.< I actually do like sad poems. The way this was set up, was very nicely done. I've usually seen happy or funny or micellaneous Acrostics. This one was original, and new to me.

Althouhg it was short, it had a very strong message. You manage to express yourself well in a poem that's so short. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

This was sad, but amazing. I can't do acrostic poems. =/ I tried once, oh yeah, never again, but you did an amazing job. I loved it.
Love,
YourDarlingx