by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Oct 24, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Fighting: |
by Michelle18
This is great...i've havent really read anything like this before..its always nice to read something new..excellent! |
by Jenni Marie
Wow.... |
by Kayla
This is one of the best free verse i have read.i didnt see any ryming but it works! i also liked the structure and you had great word choice.i admire people that can write freeverse because i'm kinda bad at it lol but this one was really good! there is a couple grammar and spelling errors but no much. my favorite line was |
by TeAr dROp
I like how you do this!!!! it make me think about it!!! vrey nice...i think your really good keep up the good work!!! |
by RAWR.
YAY |