This is amazingly different from anything I've seen, but I love it just the same! =D Wonderfully penned - Keep It Up!!!

xxEvilAngelxx

I'm not sure i understand the style.. it's still very nice, though!

Gorgeous. A very nice write. :)

5/5

Luna

You are really a terrific poet. I really enjoyed reading this poem. It captured me from the beginning to the end. 5/5 Keep up the wonderful work!

Best wishes
Letty

YAY
SUPERB!

I like how you do this!!!! it make me think about it!!! vrey nice...i think your really good keep up the good work!!!

This is one of the best free verse i have read.i didnt see any ryming but it works! i also liked the structure and you had great word choice.i admire people that can write freeverse because i'm kinda bad at it lol but this one was really good! there is a couple grammar and spelling errors but no much. my favorite line was

Let this light envolope us in its utter graciousness

lots of love, kayla

Wow....
One of the best free verse I have read in a long time...
Absolutely brilliant.

This is great...i've havent really read anything like this before..its always nice to read something new..excellent!