The 'One Man' Show {Terzanelle}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Oct 25, 2006


Eternity is his final destination
Promenading to a song sung within his head
Eternity is his final destination
Across the mighty world is where he may tread.
Burning within his heart, within his soul - fire
Promenading to a song sung within his head
Declaring eternity, 'Be my desire!'
A magical treasure sings deep within his thoughts
Burning within his heart, within his soul - fire
As the dances surround him singing secret plots.
A figure shallow snickering with hidden truths
A magical treasure sings deep within his heart
Dangling circles behind him - his shattered youth
The music is his home from which shall never part
A figure shallow snickering with hidden truths
The 'One Man' show excitedly begins to start
Eternity is his final destination
The music is his home from which shall never part
Eternity is his final destination

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The Terzanelle is a 19-line poem consisting of five interlocking triplets plus a concluding quatrain
in which the first and third lines of the first triplet appear as refrains. The middle line of each triplet
is a repeated reappearing as the last line of the succeeding triplet with the exception of the center
line of the next-to-the-last stanza which appears in the quatrain. The rhyme and refrain scheme
for the triplets is as follows:

1. A
2. B
3. A
4. b
5. C
6. B
7. c
8. D
9. C
10. d
11. E
12. D
13. e
14. F
15. E
16. f
17. A or F
18. F or A
19. A

Each line of the poem should be the same metrical length.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    Now this poem is a attention grabber. I was captivated from the first line to the last. This was just awesome. I believe that this is one of your best poems. Keep writing like this hun and you will be in my favorites in no time.5/5

    Best wishes
    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Wow. That's all I have to say. This is definitely my favourite out of the three poems I've read of yours.

    Wonderful job. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by broken reflection

    Wow that was great 5/5 from me!

  • 18 years ago

    by ALEX

    "A figure shallow snickering with hidden truths"
    that's my favorite line.

    i greatly admire you for the complexity of your poem. i'm not sure i could express something with so many rules and specifications. you wrote this well.

  • 18 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Whoa! the- umm whats it called... like pattern of repeating lines is soo confusing! Its so interesting and it grabbed my attention because i've never seen it before. Awesome job! I love how you always seem to be trying different- umm types of poems i guess.

    xxEvilAngelxx