Whoa! the- umm whats it called... like pattern of repeating lines is soo confusing! Its so interesting and it grabbed my attention because i've never seen it before. Awesome job! I love how you always seem to be trying different- umm types of poems i guess.

xxEvilAngelxx

"A figure shallow snickering with hidden truths"
that's my favorite line.

i greatly admire you for the complexity of your poem. i'm not sure i could express something with so many rules and specifications. you wrote this well.

Wow that was great 5/5 from me!

Wow. That's all I have to say. This is definitely my favourite out of the three poems I've read of yours.

Wonderful job. 5/5.

Now this poem is a attention grabber. I was captivated from the first line to the last. This was just awesome. I believe that this is one of your best poems. Keep writing like this hun and you will be in my favorites in no time.5/5

Best wishes
Letty