Wow! For such a short poem, it has so much meaning behind it! I have never seen this type of poem either. I like it! Maybe I'll even try to do one. (or maybe not... idk lol) Good job!

xxEvilAngelxx

SO...... AWESOME.....

Ooo. I thought this one definately had a deeper meaning that it appears to have. You did a great job putting so much into such a short piece. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow! this is the first time i am hearing about this style and i think you've done a great job on this one.

very profound piece of writing , my friend.

peace
shobhana

Really kool....it's simple but has such meaning to it, keep it up 5/5

I liked it but isn't SIMPLY 2 syllables? am i right or wrong? lol. that's my only correction here. but everything else. it's true! lol. 5/5 for me