Missing You

Another good poem of your 5/5. I have though of doing a acrostic too. But this was a nice poem and it had rhythm to it and you did it so well. I'd like to see you do another acrostic because if it were as good as this one, it'll be even better :)

Not bad for your first attempt at an Acrostic, they are usually hard to write if you are not used to it, but you did very well. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Another excellent write. It tugs at the heart
Rick

Well, this may be a little bit bias because at the moment I've just said goodbye to my boyfriend yet again (long distance relationship) and I miss him alot. So to go from that, to reading this, brought out my emotion like I believe poetry should. Be that because I was already emotional, or because you've obviously got a knack for triggering the pull of strings from the heart - I still think this is a really well done job. Especially for a first shot at a new style: I don't think my first shots have been so successful... Kudos (I wish I knew if that was spelled properly.)

Yes hes now the BF ;)