I liked it and i understood it wow lol it was really well set out i loved it keep it up huni xxx alex xxxx

Aaaaaw, i love this poem. This is a great dark love poem. I especially like the first paragraph. nice work.
keep it up ;)

Ooo! ^_^ You're really good at dark poems. Lol. I don't know what to say...It just caught my attention lol. Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha