Hey no this was not bad at all..I know how that feels man.. great write though..keep it up...oxo Rachy

It was not a waist of time! i liked it!! alot! my boyfriend killed himself 1year and 6mon. ago today and it ur poem is how ive been feeling! i love it! i hope u dont mind if i print it out!?! great job! 5/5 =]

I'm really impressed with this poem, it shows an unusal real piece of raw emotion that you don't see very often coming from a guy.

Take care xxx

I really like it, wow you are a really good wrighter.

Hey.. thanks for the comment! And i really like this poem.. i can really relate to it..u are a good poet.. u seem true to your words.. in the poem. some people write fake.. like its not comming from there heart.. but when i read this i could feel that it came from your heart.. if you want to email and talk .. about poems.. and stuff like that you can email me at hottopicXchick@aol.com im hoping to get a email from you soon
XD ttyl
*lots of love*
Kally

Hey this is a good poem, you can write about how your feeling really well as well

Hey tony, happy belated birthday! as gift i'll r/r/c 3 poems. anyway, i really liked this poem, it was very sad, yet really showed your emotions off great. keep your chin up. you did not waste my time

Omg...i'm sitting here and crying because this is almost exactly how i feel...this is an amazing poem...thanks for the comment on my poem earlier...it was appreciated...anyways...5/5...i truly loved this

I reckon its really good, im not just saying that. i REALLY mean it...am i making any sense? Anyway, great work! Welcome to my favourites!

This is really good and you expressed yourself really well with your emotions. 5/5

This was definately not a waste of mytime...pretty sweet poem actually.

:)

I thought it was realy good .. i liked the flow its not used very often .. its important to be able to expres the way u feel ... thats y and how i started...

That was definitely a great poem - all that crying sounds so painful, but its better than cutting or other things people due. this mite just bore you, but tears are what the body releases when you are healing from an emotion. so every time you cry, you get a little stronger.

Damn.. i know the feeling...
you put great emotion into this poem..
keep it up.. it's really good 5/5

avii*-

This poem was not a waste of time I can feel your emotion it brings tears to my eyes to know that you have to go through this I am so sorry but overall it was a very emotional and great poem excellent job on it! I give you a 5/5!

This poem was not a waste of time I can feel your emotion it brings tears to my eyes to know that you have to go through this I am so sorry but overall it was a very emotional and great poem excellent job on it! I give you a 5/5!