Dace i hope you know none of us think you rubbish.

But on a good note its an excellent poem

One mans trash is another mans treasure. just need to find that "another".

XsomeoneimnotX

Thanx 4 all the comments really liked this poem 5/5
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This was so different i really enjoyed it one thing is 4 sure your poetry could never be rubbish
5/5

I felt that the repetitve word rubbish throughout the poem establishes your feelings very strongly. this was very well written and the rhyme scheme was wonderful and it flowed great as well. definately a favorite poem of mine. 5/5

Wow! This is a very powerful piece. Wonderful write. & just to let you know I definitley don't think your rubbish. :] 5/5

marcella

Awww... dont ever blame yourself for anything that happens like that...shit happens because life's messed up but nice job!

This is interesting. Obviously you were angry and upset etc, at the time. It shows through the poem, it's full of emotion. But well done with this. 5/5

Tammie

You can really tell that you put alot of emotion into it. But you should know none of us think that you are rubbish. On another point, great poem. 5/5 as always

Kalee

Why bother trying is a harsh question 5/5 your not rubbish