by Moon Princess Oct 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Take a deep breath, |
by ViCTORiA
You got grr3at skillss wh3n it com3s to writin good job k33p up da good woork |
Wow! i loved how much emotion this poem showed! its way good |
I like this poem very sad deep emotions loved it thanks for your comment on "Death angel" |
I liked this poem i dnt no why u didnt!! lol its very emotional and i like the way u repeated "take a deep breath" |
by lisha
Wow... this poem is feeled w lots of emotion. and written nicely.. i felt like i could understand what u were talkin about cuz u made me get the picture n my head... good job! |