by Jenni Oct 25, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
& So you want to say we are not one, |
I love this poem.. i think its something many people can relate to and the rhyming and flow were flawless.. great job! |
by Jenni Marie
The opening was fantastic! |
by Cattiebrie
I agree with Celtic Rose! Fantastic opener, I was drawn in to read more. I think this is my favourite so far. I like the style of this as well, I like the you say..and so run type theme in this, does that make sense? I like the responses to it. great one! lovin it! |
by Tiffany
Very sad. the flow was so flowwing, if u get my drift...very good. |
by Gem
"So you can't unbreak what has been broken" |