I think this poem gets its point accros very well

"So you can't unbreak what has been broken"

I loved that line. It was so true
Excellent poem
5/5
*Gem*

Very sad. the flow was so flowwing, if u get my drift...very good.

thanks for the comment!

:) Tiff:)

I agree with Celtic Rose! Fantastic opener, I was drawn in to read more. I think this is my favourite so far. I like the style of this as well, I like the you say..and so run type theme in this, does that make sense? I like the responses to it. great one! lovin it!

The opening was fantastic!
It pulled me right into the poem.
I loved the imagery and flow in this, and the wording was a joy to read.

I love this poem.. i think its something many people can relate to and the rhyming and flow were flawless.. great job!