by GIRL IN LOVE Oct 25, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
So many changes, |
I thought that this was good but it could be better. some helpful critisism....well i hope....try not to have every line ryme alot then stop ryming at all sum poems are ok like that but this one could be better with your special touches. |
Not one of your best but i still enjoyed reading it. well done bub |