The Path of Love

by GIRL IN LOVE   Oct 25, 2006


Oh how the days just go by
And I still got you by my side.
I will never forget the day when we held hands,
And from that day on I was your biggest fan.

Things have changed,
You say that this can’t be,
But only in our dreams.

For we will never be able to let go,
That’s because we love each other so much.
I understand where you come from,
But you go to trust that heart of yours
And love will guide you,
On the right path forever.

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  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    The last two lines were so sweet hun.
    try to make all your stanzas the same amount of lines and the same rhyming pattern to help it flow.

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Beautiful words of love!

  • 18 years ago

    by Amber Micheal Johnson

    Wow babe...im so happy to know that i am loved by a wonderful guy. i guess he has made me forget about bj. i havent talked to him in like 2 weeks now...that makes me sad but i guess i just need to forget about him...right loves...

  • 18 years ago

    by monika

    Very well written. Great poem maybe for next time the 2nd verse is a bit different from the other 2 i think if you write a poem to make it flow well its btter to make all the verses eaqual. But very well written.

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