The Way We Were

by Dr of Bishonomics   Oct 25, 2006


I thought i was big, i thought i was strong,
but all the while my candle for you still flickers on,
a year has past but still these feelings last,
and my mind keeps playing memories way to fast,
do you still think of me on those rainy nights,
does your mind still revisit those sights,
and through it all and whatever may occur,
do you still wish we could go back to the way we were

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this!
    It was sad, but a pleasure to read.
    The flow and rhyme scheme were good and I enjoyed the wording and imagery.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelly

    Hey
    Great write! Very sad and emotional. Heartbreak sucks lol!

    Kelly
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Robin

    I liked your poem. I can relate

  • 18 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    I loved this poem!
    It was Great!
    =-)
    Good job, Your an excellent writter!
    5/5

    (Check out any of mine if you like, i wanna know what people think)

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