Stalker?

by milly   Oct 25, 2006


I saw you last night.
You were at home...me? outside.
I was watching.
I know your mind.
I know inside you.
I.
know.
you.
You think you can leave me?
Forget me? - abandon me?! You can't.
I long for you; I desire you; I need you.
need feed greed plead
Plead?
I'll plead.
Why don't you love me too?
Get out!
Getout!
I don't want you in my head...
Stop invading my thoughts:
Stop being there.
Who's stalking who now?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Ok, I feel this was not as good as some of your other poems. The Flow was not that great at all. There was no rhyme, although you don't need to rhyme for poems, when you don't you need the flow and structure behind your poem to really make it stand out, which this poem lacked both of.

    Keep your head up and keep on trying, practice practice practice...read the comments and learn make changes, and in the end you will develop very good, you have a lot of potential.

    Ciao, Joe