by milly Oct 25, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
I saw you last night. |
Ok, I feel this was not as good as some of your other poems. The Flow was not that great at all. There was no rhyme, although you don't need to rhyme for poems, when you don't you need the flow and structure behind your poem to really make it stand out, which this poem lacked both of. |