WOW THAT WAS WAY GOOD! I CAN TOTALLY RELATE! U R A TALENTED WRITER AND I LOVE YOUR STYLE! DEF KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!! ID LOVE IT IF U COULD COMMENT ON MY POEMS!
ANDI

Maybe put a THAT in

I'm sorry it came to this
I'm sorry that it came to this.

i liked part two better althoguh i did read them the wrong way round lol oops xxx alex xxx (2)