by Joe Eijyuu Oct 25, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Let my lips touch yours |
by monika
Hi, very good poem. very nicely places i love the similes you did that very well. A tip for next time this is my personal opinion however some may disagree but if you choose to rhyme something in a poem then just rhyme the whole poem. But very well written and flowed. |
Well written |