Comments : Dreamin until I get to go to Heaven

  • 18 years ago

    by Eddy

    Ooo nice.

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    "Dear God, remember this face, my mind is with you,
    And ill be dreamin until I get to go to Heaven"
    ____

    ^^^ I just loved that. Especially the very last line. this was great...Never stop writing...

    Keep your head up...

    -Poetess

  • 18 years ago

    by Tylor Dent

    Dude i loved it i feel like this everyday i got some much shit going on in my head. right now it aint funny but great poem man keepit up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by GraCiE

    Aaaah! that was sooo sweet, you should be very proud of yourself when you can write touching and heartwarming poems like this, you are very talented and dont stop creating these masterpieces...5/5