...wow... im speechless. i began to cry not even half wayy through because it reminded me of 3 ppl in my life that i have lost... one of which i saw. if this happened to you im so sorry. i know how it is to lose the love of your life. and be ripped right open.

It was beautiful and made me cry. my life has treated me in this way many times. so i know how you feel. i hurts but poetry help tell how you feel. man i love this poem so much. i am going to look for more of your poems. i loved it and i am still crying. thank you for writing it.

You are amazing and this poem made me cry
I have lost someone who meant the world to me.
He died in a car accident on Halloween night and his funeral was November 3rd 2007 my birthday.
I'm so sorry you lost someone u loved very deeply
its hard isn't it. I don't even know how to live anymore so I know how u feel.

I cried a lot when I read this poem.
I was very sad and this poem,made me cry a lot.
Well done!
XX donjeta

This poem is amazing, it touched me but i ask one thing, is this true??

I'd like to no if that was based on something real that has happened and if so wern't you a slight bit embarrsed about writng something like that? no offence or anything but it did have 2 gay men and i have nothing against gays but some ppl do so i was just curious... sorry if i imposed or you took offence i was not meaning it like that at all... and just for the record i absolutely adored the poem!

Very wonderful poem! but very sad though.. is it true?
i wish you would see my poems...though they might not be as good s yours...

goodluck and godbless in life...

That was REALLY REALLY good, even though it was long it was worth the read!! one of my favorites!!

Amazing..

Awww

stephen thats my dads name..
when i read this i cried
because i felt the love and emotion you put in this
i felt it all like i were there

and was wondering
did this really happen
write back plz

Heyy. This poem is truly amazing.

Tell me is this a true story? Private message me back please:)

I truly loved this poem
i especially liked the thoughts the character in the poem had...they added depth and personality to the poem that wouldn't have been present without it
the length was worth it, because every word had meaning and a purpose
great job!

Out of all the poems I have read on here that was truly one of the best. I think it kinda showes what some people will do for their loved one. Long but so meaningful........an amazing poem!
Kaitlyn

Omg its awesome its beautiful so much i can't explain. it is awesome NEVER give up

Bianca

The poem was really beautiful . though i may not understand how you feel , i understand the pain you have gone through . its really a sad thing to happen , but you must never give up okay?

Great poem.
Did this really happen ??
Please check out a few of my poems.
Keep writing.

I cried and cried reading this. I'm actually surprised that I read it all the way through because long poems arent usually my preference to read. But once I started I couldnt stop. If this is true, I am so sorry for your loss. And what a wonderful tribute for him. I wish you the best.

I cried that takes a lot of beauty and emotion which ur poem deffinitely had

Wow,that was just wow..im speechless..it was just such a beautiful poem..i cried reading it!this is one of my favourites!

xx

Wow this was reallllly great
i read the whole thing it was intresting
was it true?