This poem is amazing! It made me cry so much because the first part of the poem reminded me of someone. i even called them because this made me feel scared, i havn't talked to him in months. this poem is by far my favorite, it is beautiful, and there is so mush emotion behind it. Very very good

10/5 im serious i loved it!

Honey,
this was an amazing poem, writen so well and so much feeling!
it was captivating and so realistic.
it was a beautifly written poem.
honestly the best i've read for a long time.
it was unike and so unlike all the cliche suicide poems...
it was inspirational in a way (not to kill myself of course)
it was just beyand words.

have a wonderful life,

mandy grace

This is the second time that I've read this. It's still so beautiful and sad. 5/5 :)

Bri~

Is that story true??Gosh I'm so carried away..Your poem made me cry..Your a great writer.

WOW.... THAT'S ALL I CAN SAY.... BUT THIS WAS A LONG POEM... LONG BUT GREAT I LOVED THE RHYTHM OF IT..... IF ITS TRU THAT THIS PERSON IM TRULY SORRY.... HOPE YOUR HEART HAS MENDED... SORRY FOR YOUR LOST.. KEEP UP THE WONDERFUL WORK

Wonderful poem, bravo. So beautifully written. I only have one question, was this a gay relationship they had???

Hello. I just read your poem and I know it's been in the site for so long now, but it's my first time to read your poems because I don't have all the time to browse through the site. I loved it and it is so long yes but I had fun reading the lines and feeling the emotions in every line. It's an excellent write. Please do keep up the very good job. Looking for more beautiful poems from you!

This poem is so raw to the very nerve ending of emotions. I loved it so much, it's like reading out your entire life. And I know it isn't an easy feat to write out something which means so much to you in just one page of poetry, that's why I understood when you said you still felt it was short. But this is the longest poem I've ever read, and actually stuck to it. Such a very very excellent job you have done here!!! You have all my respects. Continue writing!!! 5/5!!

Omg ii luved iit.. great poem..
great iit made mii shead a couple tears..
iits such a very touching poem.
iit is jusss sooo AMAZING
:'))

My 2nd time reading this poem....& it touches me just the same!! The talent GOD blessed you with to produce such work ABOSOLUTELY AMAZING!!!!!!

Wow I have never cried so much reading a poem! Just wow... ;^; You are amazing you know that?? This is stunning!

This was beautiful yet very sad. It brought tears to my eyes and those that are in my class at the moment were asking why I was crying. there is just so much emotion here. I can feel the personal effect it has. Amazing...

The first time i read this poem.. i cried.. there is no words to express how amazing this poem is.. i can't get enough of it... i think i've read this poem more then 100 times.. i love it.. stephen you are an AMAZING... AWASOME.. WONDERFUL writer..
I'm sorry for your loss!!
katrina x
p.s i wish i could write poems like you... but sadly i can't but i'll be just happy reading your amazing one's!! x

I love love love this poem! So sad but definitely makes you think.

Hi Stephen, my name is Chloe. i am a beginner writer, well...i've love writing for a really long time. just never really put them into meaniful poems...but as i said, im starting. anyways. this poem, has an effect on me that most don't. i've dreamt about stuff like that and reading it was like reliving that dream, so vivid and real...i really enjoy your love and talent for writing, so keep it up :)

Feels like i'm watching an -hour movies =)

I love this poem. You have mixture of emotions and you can feel all of it. The showing and telling is just perfect. It is so great and i really do like it. I can't wait to read more of your poems.

Amazing.
absolutely amazing

im in tears. do i have to say more?

Losing someone who means so much to us is like leaving in an empty life...its hurts so much...i know.. coz ive been there before..and untill now...im in tears when i finish to read it...its so sad and beautifull...i hope read to more of youre poems..:):)

Very good job! the length also didnt bother me as it kept me interested in the story. good job!