by Kyleeann
Oh my goodness! |
by jazz
That was really long but really sad and beautiful. i loved it |
by Wallace
Amazing poem, you truly have a talent, excellent work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time. |
Great poem and im sorry about what happened and a poem is never to long mostly this one i can really feel it and i swear im was about to cry cuz the pain is so intense i feel it b ut it was great i give it a 5/5 and i swear it was the best poem i ever read it makes me so jealous of you I bet i can never write poems as well as you and don't let the pain get you down cuz |
Great poem and im sorry about what happened and a poem is never to long mostly this one i can really feel it and i swear im was about to cry cuz the pain is so intense i feel it b ut it was great i give it a 5/5 and i swear it was the best poem i ever read it makes me so jealous of you I bet i can never write poems as well as you and don't let the pain get you down cuz |
Great poem truly amazing. the way your words speak the truth i hope you keep writing, i love your work. |
by just me
I read this poem and it hurt......I thought of my baby leaving me and thinking he was some how to flawed to be in this world when actually he will always be perfectly imperfect in my heart. I don't really know what to say about ths except that is was devestating and somehow sadly beautiful as well..... |
WOW this poem took me so long to read but it is really good, i enjoyed it and it was worth the read! 5/5 for sure and i have to give you your props cuz i dont think that i could write something so long and still have it be a good poem! |
by Brittany C
That must have been the longest poem I have every read. It had a great flow and wonderful word choice. I gave it a 5/5 |
by moonlil
It's a very deep and touching poem. It moved me to tears. Especially that death letter. How sad...Great job! |
by handsome
I think this was the result of an experience otherwise, you wrote this on a day that was unlike any other day...you know, there are days that u know that you are in tune with your heart and something beyond yourself is about to be born...its a great piece...well done. |
by atv
I lOve this p0em s0 much. i am very s0rry to hear that. it's amazing h0w a pers0n y0u l0ve g0es away s0 quickly. 0nly G0d kn0ws where he is! im speeachless....i give you 6/5 |
One thing I have to say is that I hope anyone who read this poem did read to the very end. I've read this one so many times and it totally deserves it's spot on the top 3 best love poems. |
by Roxanne
Hey |
by nina
I really enjoyed your poem. Poems can never be too long its just how you feel! |
by Annissha
5/5 wow thiz poem waz totally amazing...i loved reading every word of it....it waz so deep i juzt didnt wanna stop reading it....even tho it took a while 2 read it waz really worth reading....i loved it....i hope u keep writing more poemz cuz u are really good at it |
by Tobie
For The First time i actualy cried To Words the passion Of the poem cought me |
by J.B.Heart
That was a very touching poem, I really liked it. I like longer poems than short ones. Good Job! |
This is an AMANING poem! ive got tears in my eyes...and taht happend rarely! It is so sad. I really do think it iss unbelivable! Sammi x x x |
Thats really sad man. did it really happen? or was it just a poem? It must really hurt if it was true. I have a tear rolling down my cheek. strange..havent felt that in a while. well im sorry if it really happened. that happening is something really hard to take in. |