I loved this poem it leaves me thinking, what were the scars from is this related to your life. it was really well written and made me cry. the length didn't bother me AT ALL. so keep up the good work.
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I loved this poem and I can tell you put alot of hard work into it I could never make one this long. Its so sweet and you even put it little thought into ever single sentence. Keep on writing I would love to read more of your poems!

This poem is amazing!!it was very touching and inspiring.thank you so much for writing it i hope to see more like this from you soon

This was one of the gratest poems ever written... it was beautiful. i felt the emotion in it just by reading it.. yeah i was crying it was really sad, yet comforting in a wierd way.. good job..keep it up..

I believe this is the best poem I have ever read... I love it.. very very nice work.. well done

I really liked your poem!Im sorry about your loss but the way you expressed your feelings about it was truly amazing!Very nice job!

Ur poem was relli good.. the length didnt even worry me.. once i started reading i hadf to get to the bottom no matter wat.. i had tears in my eyes and still do i hope that this did not nhappen to u....
amylee..xx

I really enjoy ur poems it was really sad, but it was great. i hope u the best

It's very beautiful. very emotional and i'm close to tears..... is this really true

So, pretty much, all i can say is WOW!!!! That is a really good poem!! You know, normally, if a poem was that long, i wouldnt read the whole thing. But i just started to read it, and i was hooked. I couldnt stop until the end! Thats amazing, and i hope you keep up the good work!!

Keep em' coming!!
Brandy

WOW
I RELI LUV IT
IT'S TOUCH MY SOUL

This is a really good poem...i like it...i read the whole thing and I couldn't stop till I got to the end..I enjoyed reading the poem and it seems to me that u were really depressed when u wrote it..

Truly touching and incredible. I wouldnt normally take the time to read such a long one, but this made want to keep reading and read again now that I'm done.

...Woww..that was no liee an amazing poemm..i criedd during it ..it was soo ammazingg..your an amazing writeerr..please writee soo much moreeee

-anonomoussss!

I put in the consideration of voting for yerr coz this poem of yours really touched me deep down..this is so far one of the greatest,most beautifully poem i have read..!!
and trust me,of coz i would look out for your new poems,Stephen!
keep it up!

This poem is the mozt amazing poem i have EVER read! i love it so much...its so touching

you managed to explain a whole story and still keep the rythm and the rhyming...this is deffinatly going in my favorites...and i am going to read more of your poems and maybe put you in my fav writers....i love this so much i have never read a better poem in my whole 14 years!
if this did happen to you im so sorry x
luv crissyx

I ove this poem and i dont care if it was long it was worth reading

This was a very long poem...but it was worth every second of it!!! Honestly this is the best poem that I have ever read...I'm writing through tears right now....I'm honestly blown away and I feel I have to write and tell you how much your poem moved me!!! Your style of writing is amazing and it just keeps pulling you in..and then hits you with little bombs and explosions!!! Great job...I can't find the words to say to explain to you how much I enjoyed reading this poem! Speechless..it left me speechless!!!

THIS IS SO GOOD ! i wish that i could write like this .. it was long but good , most poems just drag it out but omg this is beyond words And the words will quickly flow again,

For once in many months i just shed a tear, for the first time ever i cried over someones poetry besides my own. You made me want to keep reading...the story line in it is so sweet and sad. I am unsure how you were able to write that...but i am glad you did. The story it held was the saddest thing i have ever heard. The poem was so strongly written and so...so...amazing. I am unsure of what to say. You have left me speechless. It did not seem long to me at all, i have read poems that are pages and pages long...they are story poems just like this one. These are my favorites for they touch me the most. Do not let go of your dreams of literature for you are a master of this fine art. This poem held so much emotion that it is permantly imprinted in my beating heart. I shall never forget this poem nor you Stephen...your poetry is so pure and so delightfull. I hope so very much that you go far in life and that you do not have the fate of that young man in the poem. Such sadness that would create, for me and many other fans of yours. Live life to the fullest and always know that there is sunshine out there for you and only you. Poetry is that trickle of sunshine. Never let go of it, never subside into the dark for eternity. Let your light shine to others such as myself. This poem has just made my day a whole new day...such emotion that is displayed in here can only be shown by poets as yourself. Let your poetry be heard and never forget that you have a gift. Dont let people get you down no matter what...dont ever feel insecure for you have no reason to. You are an amazing poet and an amazing person. I wish that i knew you in real life...but i am content to know you on here. To know that there are people like you in this world today even though society has corrupted most people. Keep this comment in mind please when you write your poetry, i hope that i am of some help to you. I may not always be able to critique you....but that is only because i am in awe of your ability to write. Keep up the good work for i know that you will go far, i look forward to someday buying your poetry in the nearest book store. I know that you can make it there and even farther...i leave now with content heart and soul. You have put an everlasting tear and smile on my face...if that makes sense to you i do not know, but it does to me more than you shall ever know. 5/5 for this poem...and i am sure you shall get many more of them from me. I hope to see more of your poems that touch me like this one.

-Sabree