Stephen I cried reading this

Omg that was ahmazing =(

Amazing...just truly...amazing!!!
5/5
=]

Brought tears to my eyes x
very very well done x

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How endearing. Despite of its time-consuming length, this work truly was quite captivating to read. The beginning portion seemed to be an emotional outrage, raving about a romantic disaster and fears. Then the progression at the middle and latter part moved in a rather graphic sequence of event/s. I, however, further noticed that some lines need tightening up, in order to augment its flow. It's no big deal, really. How it was weaved in a fine style of writing thrilled me, nonetheless. An attractive piece. 5/5 ~Marian

I CAN'T GET OVER THIS POEM IT JUST KEEPS COMING BACK OVER AND OVER IT'S SO DEEP WAIST DEEP IN FACT I'VE READ IT OVER AND OVER AGAIN STEPHEN YOU ARE ONE TALENTED BROTHER AND I HOPE THAT OTHER PEOPLE REALISE THAT & DON'T MIND THE PEOPLE WHO HATE AND DON'T APPRECIATE YOUR WORK NOT EVERY ONE IS AN ARTISTS AND WOULD NEVER UNDERSTAND OUR LEVEL OF MENTALITY

Very good writing, I enjoyed reading your poem.

I'm at a lost for words. It's one of the best poems I've ever read. I even shed a tear. excellent poem!

........i dont know what to type....your words were honestly so perfect that i dont want to mar them with my clumsy insignificant words. that was amazing. it really hit the spot. sheesh, im about to cry. that poem just really goes deep. did this really happen, because you make it sound like it did? please write back, as i would love to hear from you, and maybe have you see some of mine, and even comment on some, although i think you already commented on one of them. but id love to hear some more.

~chelsea

This was very sad im sorry to hear that this happened true or false it is very sad an emotional. So this was a gay relationship that fell apart due to suicide? cause thats how I understood it from this stanza
"I was his boyfriend
I've been torn apart
I thought he had left me
-- thought he'd broken my heart..."

Very WEIRD and Very sad...

OMG.....This is the best poem I have read in my life....Im speechless...it was beautifully written and very heart felt....WOW!!

Wow this is great i teard up while reading it.

That is truly amazing. it made me cry..
it was well worth the time i spent reading it

I have nothing to say this was so amazing. this was just about the best most beautifully written poem i have ever read. did this really happen to you? i couldnt stop reading it. your very tallented. 5/5 for sure.

Wow....i dont even know what to say...except im sorry.........but you did an amazing job on the poem : ) tabi<33

HOLY MOTHER OF GOD that poem was amazing i cant realy say any thing else it was just perfect freaking 100/5

p.s. i write long poems also maybe 1/4 as long as this but longer than any one ...check mine out some time ^_^

Omg...i cant stop the tears...
i hope that he is in a place of good...
and i cant say that i am sorry because you have met such a beautuful person.. but i am sorry that it had to happend this way...
i hope that good is with him...and with you as well...
this is a very beautiful poem the best ive read in years...

The first thing i wanted to say, if this si true, that im so sorry that this happened. It was a really good poem and really sad. Please keep ur head held high and dont commit suicide. I know you might feel empty but there is alot of other ppl out there that loves you to death. Keep up the good work and im sorry for your lost

xoxoxoxo
jess

Im so touched
really im crying
its saddening to read
its shows ur love though
love it