by Amanda
WOW THIIS IS LIKE AMAZING IT REALY MADE ME THINK..... |
Omg..really really amazing:D..u haeva wonderful way with words..the imagery was brilliant and i..well wot can i say just luvd it:D |
by Megan Sue
All I've got to say is...WOW |
by Koo
Yea...not bad...long...yes....but...not my style...still well written =) |
by ShootingStar
Wow.it's long but i love it!excellent poem.*5 |
by SiL
I loved that you were able to write this really and turely a piece of art |
by sezz
So sad but so brilliant at the same. a heart wenching piece that draws you in from the very start, great work |
by Sarahh
Im speachless this poem is full of excellence and beauty its so amazing! the length of it makes it so much better. well done.!!!! |
by HUGIYDAWY
OH MY GOD... |
by Love Fallacy
I really liked this piece. Really conveyed emotion . Keep up the good work. If you could, check out some of my work. I think you would really like it. Thank you and nice job. |
by yoyi
I love this poem is so cute |
by Ian Vincent
Hey man I really dont have the proper words to say for your loss and I dont think I should try but just wanna say that that was an amzingly good poem, I along with you and many others have had many a death of very loved ones I only hope you have or are recovering from this! you write flipping amzing man thank you for the read! Tis an honor to read such amazing work |
by Lacey Marie
Omg Stephen..This Poem Is prolly one of the best ones i've read so far..I really enjoyed it and it almost made me cry! Keep it up! |
by Imogen
A very well written but very sad poem. It didn't seem long when I was reading it and it's an amazing poem... |
by Juanita
Wow I got to the end like"where the rest?", but i dont read long poems like these but something made me say and read it and i loved it! |
by Kenny
. . . So so fantastic. . really. . when i am reading this long yet so short poem, the hairs of my skin |
by Andrea
This was a great poem it made me cry like so much its so sad but it made me understand a lot and to realize stuff that I'm going through I'm like so sad cause the guy i love doesn't love me back but then when i think back i realize that at least i get to see him like everyday and try a new beginning because he hasn't really left just the feelings he had towrds me and I rrreeaalllyy want to thank you for making me understand that. And i don't know if this really happened to you but it seems like it did and i just wanted to say I'm sorriies :/ |
Wow i dont know what to say i guess my tears say it all.... its a great poem and i enjoyed reading. Grreat poem and its realy sentimental u did a great job... |
THAT WAZ BEYOND WORDZ TO EXPRESS HOW GREAT THAT POEM WAZ GREAT JOB 5/5 |
Wow that was incredible im so sorry for your loss he must have ment alot to you i sometimes wish that my ex was dead just because he treated me so badly but then i read somthin like this and i feel so terrible nowing that atleast i can still see him but for others people die that we love |