That was brilliant

absolutely fantastic

so much emotion put into the words

fantastic

That is a great poem.....tears came to my eyes lol....but seriously it was good!! Really good!! 5/5!!

I'm amazed! there is so much emotion in that poem...although it is long it seemed to go by really fast. its intreaging and beautiful! i loved it. its sad and sweet, brought tears to my eyes. out of all the poems on this site this one especially made me want to cry.

OMG Stephen.... That's all I can say. This is..... Whoa. I'm crying and... Whoa.

*speechless* It made me cry....
5/5.

Im sorry about that & i love it
u got a great talent

Great ! Great ! Great ! I have nothing to say.
Sorry for what happen. T_T

That, i must admit, was the best poem I have ever read. You my friend, are amazing beyond belief. You are an incredible poet. I absolutely LOVE your poems. They are soooo touching. You are amazing, simply amazing. I cannot even imagine myself writting such a heartwarming thing. You are an inspiration to all. This person in your poem, was a very lucky person to have you in your life (if it is a true story of course) but really, any guy or girl would be incredibly lucky to have you. you really made my heart melt.
Justine
5 out of 5

This is very sad but very beautiful steven.. Great job i hope this ist true and its just a poem.. And if it is real i totaly understand how you feel

That was friggen amazing even though everyone else said so too. hah, but yeah wow. 5/5 wish i could give you more

very nice

That was absolutly amazing. It pulled me in so much that i felt what was put into that poem and it filled my heart with ake. it mad my eyes fill with tears as i read each line.
This is one of the most beautifulest, an amazing poems i've ever read. Everything in it just jumps at the ready and almost shows them what it felt like.
I hope you never change this.
The langth wasn't that bad, i didn;t ind reading it because it really pulls the readers in.
Once again amazing work.
I hope to read some more of your work.

<3
Emilie

Hi stephen tthis has a great effect in me it is great and really it's the best poem i had ever read i don't know what to say coz after i read it all my feeling has break down it makes me cry and imagine the accinedt great job and keep going thank you for it

Cool well done...:p

Kinda confuse, is stephen a girl or a boy?

It IS Long...hahahaha!

This was really good, long but good and a little repetitive but you'll get the hang of it...

Wow! That was so good! So beautiful, so.. sad. I was wiping tears from my eyes and i could feel ur pain and anguish and sadness and depression through your words. wonderful word choice and flow. I have a really short attention span so for me to get through taht and actually know what i read was amazing! you did a wonderful job keep it up!

Simply amazing, yet so sad. It brought tears to my eyes, the story is so powerful, i jsut got drawn in and the length didnt matter.

<3 B

Omg this poem is really long but its a great poem! i love the whole thing .... i usually have a favorite part in the poems i read but in yours i love the whole thing .... i cant even pick one part as a favorite ... LOL! keep up the great work.

All I can say about this is that it is VERY good. It was really sad too. almost made me cry.(but in a good way)

You are a very talented writer and i hope you keep it up!!

Good Job!