I like this alot...
i love the way you expressed your feelings
and your choosen words..
i think alot of people will be able to relate to this.. it's good you've put our feelings in words for us... thanks!..

At the beginning i was like -is it going to be like this the whole time- and then you changed it yays i loved it sooooo much absoulutly beautiful.

Hey,I usually come on this site just to read short poems and quotes. I was not even a member or this site, but after your reading your poem (for some reason its the first long poem I read..usually i scroll down and if its too long I go back). I had to create an account to show how touching this poem was and I bet up in Heaven your boyfriend is looking down on you and loving you still. Be strong.

Dear lord that i dont believe exists!
this is one of the very few poems that has brought a tear to my eye.

"A tear slides down my ghostly face
and falls onto my sheets.
(Wre you just playing with my head?
Did you truly love me?)"

the third line, there is a typo, should be "Were".

That is the only thing i found wrong with this. but this typo shouldnt matter, its a breathtaking poem!
5/5

<3 The Devil

This poem is amazing! i'm sorry for your loss

It doesnt matter about the length of it
the poem is simply amazing
i was hanging onto every word
it was gorgeous, just gorgeous
I added it to my fav poems list
you should be proud to write such a great poem
5/5
xx

That was, by far, the longest poem I have ever read in my life, but the length didn't matter. It was just too good to stop reading. I must say though, it was one of the best, too. I felt the emotion you put into it. The words actually brought tears to my eyes. Adding the letter made the whole poem even more realistic in my eyes (not saying it isn't), it is a very beautiful poem. =]

Great Job!

-Irene

That was, by far, the longest poem I have ever read in my life, but the length didn't matter. It was just too good to stop reading. I must say though, it was one of the best, too. I felt the emotion you put into it. The words actually brought tears to my eyes. Adding the letter made the whole poem even more realistic in my eyes (not saying it isn't), it is a very beautiful poem. =]

Great Job!

-Irene

It totally broke my heart.
bravo.

Wow, :[[ That almost brought me to tears...that just kept me reading that was beyond beautiful and you have a very lyrical soul. wow. i dont think words could express how greatly that affected the way i feel towards anything now. keep up the amazing work...100/100

That was juss AMAZING! i dont even wat to say. I almost cried while i was reading the letter! OMG AWESOME WORK! 5/5.

[ that was really sad. ]

WOW simply amazing.. This brought tears to my eyes.. it was really long but so beautifully written that I couldn't bring myself to stop reading it.. I had to read the whole thing.. it was soo sad and I'm so sorry for your loss if this is true. I felt like I was actually there experiencing the entire thing. Amazing poem...

This is true isn't it? if it's not, than you are better than i thought. this is an extrodirnary poem, and if this is true, i wish you the best.

if you could return the favor with some votes and comments on mine, i'd really appreciate it. thanks. :)

That Was By Far The Most AMAZiiNG &&Meaniinful Poem ii Have Ever Read!
iit Bought Tears To My Eyes! It Was Soo Beautiful! It Diidnt Even Seem Tha Long When Uu Get Into It;; You Hav An Amaziing Talent! Keep It Up :)

Lots Of Love
x

Wow.. i dont really know what to say. All i know to say is that this is probably the most amazing poem i've ever read.. not only because the verses were so well written or that it flowed in a straight path.. but because it touched my heart and probably many others.. it was beautiful, wonderful. I hope you continue to write for.. ever.

if this is a true story, then i pray that all goes well for you and the person. I hope that this is not a true story, but if it is God bless you, and him.

Fantastic Job ;; keep up the amazing work.<3

It feel like is a masterpiece...
Is a piece of art...
Well is great and really deep that it can really tear one's heart apart...
Thx for sharing it...

Deep... and makes you think... Is Possibilities...

Gosh!!!...
that was really long but it's worth it!!!...
I really love it!!...
it makes me really think!!..
keep pn writing..
5/5

I love you poem!! It is amazing!! My dad took his own life so I can kinda relate. Well Done!! Good job!! How do you vote????

OMG THIS IS SOO GOOD!! perfect!!
very touching.. i
the letter was indeed a good piece.. i love it..
this a short comment but the piece is jsut too good i dun noe where to start..

keep up hte work,

Kev.

Wow your poem was wonder full i mean it was deep i could some what relate to it. your poem at the end brought tears flowing thank you for letting me read it.

~mii5t3riiu05~