Love And Hate

by EM0CHiLD 0F THE DEAD   Oct 25, 2006


Such a thin line between,
The feelings that I've felt.
The feelings you caused.
The feelings you could of helped!
Now there over.
Handled and delt.
Were over too,
Unloosened is the belt.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    This is a really good poem, and i loved the fact that in such a short space you created such an amazing tension between the reader. it was truly inspiring. just a lil help... the second from last line you wrote 'were' i think it needs an apostrphy..'we're'. other than that 5/5 keep it up.
    Please could you read and comment on some of my poems, i would love to hear from you. Thanks...Kirsty

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