That is fukking wicked...i loved it!! anyone that has written dark poetry could feel the raw emotion in this piece...5/5!! i loved it keep writing

xx

O.O Um- to be honest... I think you need stanzas.. and a point...
No offense, but I couldnt understand it. =/
And it was hard to read. still good job.

Happy writing
Hannah-

btw- thanks for the comment.

Hey I like your poem it's awesome! Thank you so much for the comment on my poem! Again great job! buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

I really loved this poem the way it is You a better dark writer then me!!! So Yeah! 5/5! Keep up the good work!

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I loved the beginning.. the whole dark aspect of ppl "surviving the Devil's High"
how fear can motivate u to do things, and not think about the consequences..

the whole poem gave me an eeire feeling of fear and deviousness at the same time..

i liked how it made me tense up and my breath get caught in my throat.. even tho uve got no rhyme scheme, it sounded good, and the flow wasnt bad

however, i felt that by the end, it wasnt consistent as where u started, and that put me off a little, but it was still good, tho u started reli strong

mm, ur last line was gr8 as an ending, though :D

keep it up
take care
thnx 4 ur comment
sorry mine is soo overdue
NannO

I thought this was excellent. extremely dark, It kept my absolute attention the whole time reading. The only thing that confused me a bit, is it didn't rhyme in the beginning, then towards the middle and so on, it did. That confused me as a reader, but regardless, you did a good job. 5/5