Yes, no matter my religon, i disagree with what eves purpose was as well. if u know of the times before Eve, there was Lilith (adam's first mate, but also his equal) who was exciled becuz she was indomitable and would not surrender to Adam. that is how it should be. i like ur writing, and this is the first i've seen of it, but i think its good (i found it while skimming the religious poems). good job, check out my new religous poem when u have time.

weeping.

Wow

What a gorgeous vocabulary you have!
*ends comment with that*
*re-considers*
That poem was great! I love the constant theme you stick to- gah! *drools* Brilliant.