Hey. you're poem really isn't a poem. however i do understand that it wouldn't fit in the 'quotes' either.

the words aren't bad... but i think that some punctuation and some sentance structure things (capitalization and other puntuations) would make it much more pleasent to read. also, i think that if you broke it down into a longer colloum, it would be easier for a reader to read it. but hey, it was good.