Forever I love u....

by Saravana Kumar S   Mar 18, 2004


With time,everything in life fades,
what remains with us are just the shades
Of the people we cared to love and loved to care,
but one person whom i loved and cared is just unaware...

As night falls and everyone goes into silence,
My heart just wakes up and finds itself within a fence...
It doesn't try to get out and get free,
because as u went by for the last time,u made it to freeze...

In the end,i c u at a mile saying goodbye,
Not caring abt my heart and making it to cry...
I looked into ur eyes,which said everything is over
I then asked my heart and it said ur love is forever...

WHAT WE ALL NEED IS A LITTLE BIT OF ENCOURAGEMENT TO DO BETTER FOR OURSELVES AND FOR OTHERS...SO FEEL FREE TO RATE OR COMMENT ON THIS POEM....THANX

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  • 20 years ago

    by lawrence

    hi Kumar. this poem is very good! really love the first two lines! "with time, everything in life fades, what remains with us are just the shades" just shades... so poignant! i must have read it like 5 times! just hope this is not what you are going through... great work! FIVE!