by DMG Oct 26, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I kiss her lips and mine form a smile, |
Nice poem its really touching in a way. but i like it. read one that i did calls "i ask" |
Nice writing:D |
by jessica
I love this poem. u really know how to write poems good job... oh and i wrote u a message too |
Really good poem, so dark and painted in black and red. I love your writing! 5/5 |
Wow thats all i can say this poem was very sad. it kept of eyes glues to the screen i dint want to miss a single syllable! |