by tragic Oct 26, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
Be who people want you to be |
by Tara
I like the words and the message that you convey BUT (this is only constructive criticism) you should aline the bars so they flo....a poem is all about delivery...and if you can't read it to your audience you should set it up so they can feel it. You know what I mean? |