Hold on

by tragic   Oct 26, 2006


Be who people want you to be
or be a follower
of society
no matter who
ask yourself
is it the right person
or just another diversion
you
but a different version
trying so hard
to be some one else
you forget who you are
your so great
but you don't realize
until its too late
parents didn't spoil you
how unfortunate
be glad your not in an orphanage
grab what you have
and tightly hold on
cause you don't know what you got
till its gone

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tara

    I like the words and the message that you convey BUT (this is only constructive criticism) you should aline the bars so they flo....a poem is all about delivery...and if you can't read it to your audience you should set it up so they can feel it. You know what I mean?
    Tara