Lovely! so touching yaar.
hey! m the first one to comment. and i feel honoured :0)

i loved the 2nd para. gr8 write as usual. 5/5

Absolutely beautiful sad penned you potray here, though simply, but i could relate it, the emotions within every stanza....anyway i hope everything well with you and many thanks for taking time to visit my stuff and leave your nice comment, i very appreciated, best wishes, take care. bert ~

Hey darl very touching words. very well written. u expressed urself really goodd. xx

Oh this is truly amazing!
I like the previous more but this is really cute!
I dunno, lol! I hvn't got much to say since you already know my opinion about your poems =)

Just Keep it Up & Stay The Best
NemO xxxxxxxx

"I know in love one is bound to sacrifice"

very profound words - that is what love is all about - finding solace in sacrifice. I do hope these trying times will pass for you and you will be able to smile once more.
peace and good luck
shobhana

Sacrifice... aaahhh, the legendary concept of love. The greatest love is the love that comes with all your will, without the expectation of getting anything in return. And I know you're good at that, so keep sacrificing in love.

Take care
Michelle

I love that word sacrifice, great poem xox sam

5/5. I really loved this poem! It had so much emtion in it!

You probably dont need this, you have so many people already commenting your awsome poems, it seems no matter how long my poems are, they could never be as good, or get as much attention, and you do that very well, great poem, 5/5

"My paper heart bleeds every single day
So i hide behind your house and pray"

Paper heart... it seems so much more fragile when described this way.
Excellent wording.
5/5
*Gem*

Awesome poem, sad but good

This poem brought on the tears. How hard it would be to love someone you can not have. Execellent job!

Though my fate has other plans for me
I could feel them when i close my eyes
And i won't mind to dig myself in my own grave
I know in love one is bound to sacrifice

I hope one day your wishes all come true.
Always thinking of you
Love Your friend Cindy

Nitin
Another awesome choice for the featured writer of the week. Congrats! This is such a sad poem. It brings tears to the readers eyes.

My paper heart bleeds every single day
So i hide behind your house and pray
If i could be given just one more chance
To sing an endless song for you and stay

This stanza just moved me so much...an excellent choice by Sam!
Love Cindy