by Darien Oct 26, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
The Sun Still Shines |
by Brittany C
Very good and very true. Keep up the good work;) another 5/5 |
You make some very pertinent observations here that are expressed clearly with a nice positive overtone. I think the final 2 lines sum things up perfectly. |
by Jenni Marie
I liked the last stanza especially. |
Whie I ejoyed this poem, I believe your love poems and sad poems are a better quality writing wise yet I really thought well of this idea that you had. Especially you're final couplet, as it is true about finding happiness. Your imagery was nice though, with my avorite being the effect of the rain on the window : ) |
So true, i loved reading this one... ur very talented keep it up |